Street Attire from a Field of Onlookers *Awarded*
Street Attire from a Field of Onlookers Head full of airy thoughts spills out onto a highway of onlookers. Slackers in street attire, ordinary rhetorical lip speakers who gather each day like...
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Very interesting and creative Gabs. Deifferent and original....I like what you did with this, funky cool!
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Such darkness and such talent! Totally AWESOME!
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Gab, what an interesting piece of work here. 2 times over and my mind is still trying to capture everything said. The title captivates me too. I believe we are all the onlookers and street attire...
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I found this explosive in imagery and feel, and that ending sends the mind spiraling in its wake... Bravo!!! Bri~ From Bri to Dawn *Our love is Our song*
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Hi Karen, Appreciate your thoughts on this. The idea for this poem came to me while taking a side road where a huge wreck was holding up the traffic. On this side road there where a bunch of various...
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Hi Lanaia, Thank you so much for your enthusiastic support. Appreciate ya Lit with Kick!
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Hi Ken, Exactly! **clapping my hands together** Appreciate your analysis on this Ken. You are so right, at various times we will be either one. Each of us will be viewed from various angles, depending...
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Hi Bri, Thank you so much for the surprise award on this piece. Totally unexpected, appreciate it too. Always like to present various ideas and images to us that we often overlook, yet are highly...
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"Worms slither by unnoticed, their bellies filled with too much jelly and notions. Fun gals who speak lively walk up smelling of wild roses. Intoxicated crowd is now infused with nature as this...
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Quote:Thought I had stumbled into some sort of festival. so did i! so many images busy doing and moving .. and you showed it well my dear ^_^ btw .. your blessings are sweet poetess ~ Secret ~
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Hi Traci, Actually Bourbon street is much like this, quite dark IMHO. Appreciate you spotlighting those areas in the piece. Thank you so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed. Lit with Kick!
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Hi Secret, Thank you so much dear Poetess. Humbled and thrilled at the highlight on this piece. Blessings to you! Lit with Kick!
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This makes me think of the movie, "Mermaids" starring Cher. Good stuff. Thanks for the words in a head change.Quote:The calm, Cool face of the river Asked me for a kiss. ~Langston Hughes
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Gabriella, thank you for taking me with you on this side-street diversion. Made me think of the lyrics/video of, LA Woman, by, The Doors, for some reason. Congrats on your very deserved Award. rena I...
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Hi Firefly, Never saw that movie. Always enjoy Cher's work. Will have to check out the movie. Appreciate your thoughts, glad you connected with it and thank you! Hi Rena, I love the Doors! Okay, sorry...
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OUTSTTTTTTANDING!! very zealous! .
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Hi Allison, You are a sweetheart. Thank you dear Poetess. Lit with Kick!
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Gariella....this has always been a most intriguing write....it's interesting the thoughts and explanations we create in our minds so that we understand....and our focus....our *seeing* is in one...
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Hi Alexis, Appreciate you saying that about this particular piece. Wasn't sure at first whether to share my inspiration for the story. Love it when people derive their own interpretation. Sometimes it...
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